i've heard so much about how great this club is not only that but it's not dead - yet. sooooo just for fun and to see how cool it is i would love to join! (ps. heh heh (poke burnoutboy) hi twin =.=)

marmaladeboyfan- oooooooooooooooo burnoutboy ur my boy twiiiiiiiiin yay! i'm no longer just a "marisa" but a burnoutboy too! haha as u see i'm a friend of treefairyalieah. not only that but i'm also a lazy bum... ahhhh what joy to see a weirdo out in the world beside me and my oddnessity.

ok...that was wierd...but misa...ull always be just a "misa"...

thnk u! me so happy u liked my stry! (burnoutboy) and u too (uzu-chan)!

ill see if i can find u on quizilla...my frnd status is so sad...no frnds at all! wat a record! ill add u to my frnds list and message u...i hope u answr...my username is magicalsapphireprincess...i kno...odd...but i cudnt find my fav name...midnightprincess (it was taken here too)...well...also...me gonna add u to my frnds list,...that way i can send u more of the stry and (i hope) not get credits taken off for it being too long...uhoh...i thnk this is too long...is it?...me no kno...watevr...well, heres chap 3...(T-T:yes...only chap 3...)

Chapter 3

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“Let me go!” “ Shut up!” “Help!” “Now you’re gonna get it!” “No! Please! Help! Help! Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!”
Tires screech. I hear a gunshot. A great shock of pain hits me. I’m paralyzed with it. I can’t move. I feel blood cover my face. Then everything turns black.
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Arianna woke up screaming. Her body was drenched in sweat and covered with dry blood. She uncurled herself from her ball. Why did those two voices sound so familiar? I’ve had that dream before and until now; I’ve never recognized those voices…why did I recognize those voices now…why?
“ARIANNA! GET UP! NOW!” Arianna was interrupted from her thoughts by a scream. Suddenly, she felt someone yank her hair. “GET UP YOU LAZY BITCH!” Arianna was yanked to her feet. “Go get ready for work!” Arianna ran out of the room. She grabbed an old dress and rushed into the bathroom, not wanting to imagine what her stepfather would do next if she didn’t hurry.
When she got out, she had an old, raggedy dress. It reached her knees and was a faded green color. In its days, it had been a beautiful dress. It had had two straps. The dress had been beautiful with its elegant designs and bright colors. Now it was old and dirty. Its colors were dull and faded. One of its straps was broken, so the dress was only held up by one strap. Under it, Arianna wore a white shirt. As for her hair, she had it tied up in an old, faded bandanna.
The reason she wore bandannas was because of an accident that had happened years ago. When she had been seven, she had been cooking something for her stepfather, but it had gone horribly wrong. As she had been cooking, her hair had gotten too close to the fire and had caught on fire. She had put it out in the sink. By the time the fire was out, her hair had been burned already. She had been forced to cut it. Now, it was shoulder-length and in layers.
When she reached the kitchen, she started cooking her stepfather’s breakfast. As it was cooking, she opened the cupboard and looked around. After making sure no one was in sight, she took out a small bottle with sleeping pills. She poured a cup of orange juice after the food was ready and put two pills inside. They dissolved quickly and were gone in seconds. She put it on a platter and brought it to her stepfather who was in the dining room. She pretended to walk away but hid in her secret place; the fireplace.
The fireplace was very fancy. But it was also a secret passage. When you leaned on the wall in the back, it would open. It was like a flap. She went through it and stayed there for a while, waiting for the snores. As she had guessed, she heard her stepfather snoring few moments later. If the instructions were correct, then he would be asleep for the whole day. Perfect. Now I can go to the park and meet Melanie and Denzel! She went down the tunnel and after a few minutes reached the trapdoor. She opened it and quickly climbed up the steps and was outside a few seconds later. She closed the trapdoor and started walking. Now, she could go to the park!
Arianna found the dirt path quickly and was soon on her way. This is going to be a long walk. I should’ve gotten food. Oh well, it’s too late to turn back now. Slowly, she followed the path, enjoying her freedom. I wonder why they wanted me to mee them...mabye they’re gonna tell me about the accident. Arianna spent the rest of the walk wondering what happened in the park five years ago.
~*~
“Hi Denzel! “ “Hi! Has Arianna come yet?” “No. Not yet. It’s still 1:30, we said at 2:00.” “Yeah, you’re right.” “Listen, what are we going to tell her?” “What else? The truth.” “Even the part about us?” “Everything. She wants to know what happened, so we’ll tell her.” “Ok.” “ I wonder why she wore those clothes. I mean, she didn’t even have shoes on, but she still had money to buy groceries. Doesn’t that sound weired?” “I know, but its none of our business, so we can’t really ask her. I mean we barely know the girl.” “Yeah, you’re right.”
“Denzel! Melanie! Hi!” “Hi!” said Melanie.”Hi!” said Denzel. “We thought you weren’t gonna come.” “Sorry, I came late.” “It’s ok.” “Well, now that we’re all here, let’s eat!” “Lets sit here.” “Ok!” “I’ll set up the food.” Melanie started unpacking a basket she had brought. Arianna stared at it. Suddenly she remembered something.

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“C’mon! Lets set up the picnic here!” “Ok!”
~*~
“Why don’t we make a promise!?” “What type of promise?” "A...a...friendship promise!” “Ok
~*~
“We,...,..., and... promise to always stick by each other’s side. To always protect each other from danger. To always help each other in our times of need. To always be there for one another. And most importantly, to be friends forever...”
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Arianna froze. She had never remembered this before. She tried to remember the faces of the children that had been talking. How many children were there? But the more she tried to remember the details, the more she forgot them. Suddenly, she felt dizzy and faint. Denzel noticed quickly and said “Are you ok? You look pale.” “I’m fine...” whispered Arianna. Suddenly the world spun around her. She felt herself falling and everything went black.

merged: 11-20-2006 ~ 05:46am
hope u like it!

Uzuma-san- Haha, you can pull my cheeks but just not too hard! I don't want to have bright red cheeks!(Plus, it would hurt!) anyway, I love those scenes, but I can't find any anime like that that I could download for free!(And legaly!) I've been searching for a while now, but I still haven't found any!

Ooooooh, I love strawberry shortcake! I always buy some at the bakery down the street from school and much on it on the way home! It's expensive(at least at the place I go to), but it's soooo good! I love it! Well, I can't say anything about a creampuff though, because I've never had it before.....Well, I'll get it tomorrow! Haha, I don't really like fruitcake either! It's the most expensive cake at the bakery, but I hate it. Well, that's not exactly a bad thing, since it's the most expensive! Ah, crap, now I have a craving for strawberry shortcake!

Well, I really like scaring people and spying a lot. I never hurt them, but I always secretly listen to their conversations and simply follow them for fun! And they never see me or suspect that I'm following them! People always call me a ghost since I'm so sneaky! I get a weird satisfaction out of it... Well, we both have kind of odd habits/cravings/satisfactions/gifts/skills/odd abilities/I've run out of words.......Can't describe it.....

Whoah, you can get credits taken off for long posts!? I guess I'm lucky not to be penalized for my previous posts! I have to start making my posts shorter.....well, this post really isn't helping....

Nissa-san- Ooooh, I'm hooked! I can't wait to see what happens! And don't worry, I've become acustomed to the symbols, so I have no problem reading it anymore! So you don't have to work so hard and revise the whole thing! Take a break! Oh, my Quizilla username is the same as my username here on MT. Burnoutboy! I'm just too lazy to come up with a new usename. Well....I guess it's also because I'm afraid that I'll forget my username and never be able to log onto quizilla again!

Well, I've heard of Harry Potter, but I've never read it or seen the movie. I almost read it, but when I saw that the book was 600-700 something pages, my head started to hurt! I'm perfectly capable of reading it, it's just that I'm lazy! I really have to get up and do something...

Don't worry about typing too much, because I love to read the posts here on MT! It's one of the few things that make me smile! Oh, but you might loose credits for making long posts(Big words, coming from the guy who composed this post! Haha), so... I guess you have to limit it to one chapter at a time.....that sucks...

Ratkiller-san- Haha, I thought that you hated rats! To be honest...I kinda dislike rats...but, that's beside the point! It's a kinda cool username! If I played FF11 with the username Burnoutboy, I'd probably be in some big trouble!

Oh, you're so lucky! You can play online! I have a PS2, Xbox and Xbox 360, but I don't have Xbox live or dsl! I've wanted to go online with Burnout and Battlefield! heck, If I had dsl and a more powerful computer, I'd play W.o. w and auto assult! But, I'm confined to a single player experience....Well, in about....4 more years, I can get my own place and get everything I want! Then I can really get my game on! I wanna play FF11 so bad....

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ratkiller
welkom welkom! enjoy yrself here ^^ wats the signifikance of yr name by the way? ^^ jus kurious =p

you mean, why so? why this name?
Actually, it's not because I hate rats that much =) It just came to my mind, when I was playing WC3...DemonHunter heroes have names of that kind, so, I thought of something and came to "RatKiller" it's my main nickname in many games, whether on-line, or not)

makoto-chiB-kun
yr soooooooooooo cuteeeeeee! if i kould see you right nao id pinch yr cheeks an pull them! ! hahaha! omg yeah! i lov being intune with the mushy scenes ! hahaha! awww yr no fruitcake... [i dont really like fruitcake]... yr mor of a.... strawberry short cake ^^ hahaha! an ill be a kreampuff ! mai favoriteeeeeee wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! haha hurting people? it is one of mai favorite pasttimes... ^^"' i lov skaring people... an.. somtimes i think i like hating people... o.O thats really badd...

kishi-chan
you no... i wz reading somwher that you kould get kredit points taken if you post really long posts... um.. but ill check up on that again for you okay? but... i think that one chapter at a time is good ^^"' i dont hav enough time to stay on the komp and read evrything x_X but im liking it so far! =D but yeah kishi-chan... it wz so long hahaha! thanks!

ai-chan
ahhhhhh! oh at mai guestbook thingy? mm.. i didnt reply...? (_ _) . . . i thot i did... but i guess that wz a dream ^^'' oh dear... gotta go reply to them nao ^^'' haha!

m.i.a. ^^

Uzuma-san:
No my sweetheart before that...when i send a picture to wich you a good halloween^^.
Welcome ratkiller!

oh...the symbols...well... i rlly dont kno y thy pop up...but thy always do...thy stand for punctuation marks like: quotations, exclamations, apostraphes...(i suck at spelling)...and other marks...it always happens...i kno how hard it is to read...ive had to do that w/ my frnd's stry...but just ignore thm...only pay asttention to the words...(i kno its hard to do)...hmmmlemme see wat i can do 2 fix it...and heres chap 2-3...hope u like it!

Chapter 2

A girl was walking through the park. She was about 11 years old. She had a very ragged, old dress. Its color was faded and it was filled with holes. She had no shoes on and was walking slowly, enjoying the peace and quiet. What a beautiful day, she thought to herself. As she was walking she was singing softly to herself.
Suddenly, she saw two kids about her age. One was a girl and the other was a boy. The girl had her head on the boy’s shoulder. The boy had his arm around the girl’s shoulders. They were standing still, staring into the distance as if in a trance. That’s odd, she thought. The path she was following was a secret path that not many people knew. She was usually the only one that followed this path. She had never encountered people on this path before. I should go see what’s wrong.
She walked up to them and asked, "Are you two ok? Both of you look a little pale." The girl had tears in the eyes. She looked up at her. "Oh, us? Oh, we're fine. We're just remembering things." "Yeah. We're fine," said the boy. "Ok. Hey, I've never seen you two before. I take this path everyday. Not many people take it. It's sort of a secret path." The girl looked at her strangely. "We've been taking this path ever since we were little. We grew up near here. And yeah, this path is sort of secret. We're the only ones who know about it."
"Oh, ok. What are your names?" "My name's Melanie and this is my friend, Denzel. We grew up together. What's your name?" "My name's Arianna. I've I’ve lived in the forest, near the path that leads to this path as long as I can remember." "Ok." "Are you sure you guys are ok? You really do look pale." This time Denzel answered. "Yeah, we're ok. It's just that this path always give us the creeps. It's like something bad happened here years ago." "I agree. Every time I reach this area, I always feel like something horrible happened here years ago. It's as if this area is haunted. It gives me the feeling that something went horribly wrong a long time ago." There was silence for a while.
Arianna suddenly remembered something. "Oh my! I have to go! My stepfather said I have to buy groceries and I'm running late! If I get there late, I'll get in trouble! Gotta go! Bye!" Arianna started walking away. Melanie thought about something for a second and then shouted out "Arianna?" Arianna stopped, turn around and looked at Melanie. "Yes?" "You're right, there was a horrible accident here years ago. A little girl was kidnapped and disappeared forever." "Oh." There were a few moments of silence. "Meet us here at 2:00 PM tomorrow, ok?" "Ok, bye!" Arianna walked away.
“What do you think she meant by ‘get in trouble’?” “I don’t know.” They were silent for a few moments. Then, Melanie and Denzel started heading back home. The strange girl, Arianna was on their minds the whole way.
~*~
Oh god. I’m late! I hope I don’t get in trouble! I hope I don’t get caught! What should I do?! What should I do! I’m gonna get in trouble! Oh god, oh god! Arianna hesitated before entering her stepfather’s mansion. She took a deep breath to calm down. Then she went in and looked around. This is good; it doesn’t look like he’s here. He might be sleeping or doing something. She headed straight for the kitchen and started putting the groceries away. When she finished that, she looked at the dishwasher and saw it was full. She started washing them. Then what she had dreaded happened.
“ARIANNA!” Arianna jumped and dropped the plate she had been washing. “WHERE ARE YOU?!” She froze. He stomped into the kitchen. “Where have you been for the last hour?!”, he demanded. “I-I was b-buying the gr-groceries.”, stuttered Arianna. “For that long?!” “Well, I g-got there e-early and h-had to w-wait. W-when it f-finally opened, th-there was a l-long line.” “You’re lying! Get over here, right now!”
Arianna stayed where she was, frozen. Her stepfather walked toward her and yanked her hair. She slipped on a wet rag she had dropped and landed on the floor, where the dish had broke. “How dare you!? After everything I’ve done for you!? This is how you repay me!?” Arianna stayed on the floor where she was. She knew that if she moved it would only make things worse.
Her stepfather grabbed her by her hair and dragged her toward the attic stairs. He forced her up the stairs and pushed her into the attic. She fell on the floor and hit and old table with an ancient ceramic pot on it. It fell on her. She screamed in pain. “That’s what you get you filthy bitch! You’re gonna stay here until I say so! And don’t plan on eating anything for a few days, ‘cause you’re not gonna get anything!”
Arianna curled up into a ball and started crying softly. This is how life had been for her for the last five years. Before that, she couldn’t remember anything. All she knew was that her parents had died and she had been adopted. Her adopted mother had gotten a divorce and remarried. One day, Arianna had been with her adopted mother and there had been a horrible accident. Her adopted mother had died and she lost all her memory. He had been given custody of her.
Arianna thought about the day she had woken up in the hospital, five years ago. She had seen her stepfather and he had told her this story. She cried, wishing she could remember what had really happened to her. For some reason, she just couldn’t remember anything. At times she remembered short, unimportant memories. But they never helped her figure out who she really was. When she had met Melanie and Denzel, they looked familiar, but she couldn’t understand why. Maybe I knew them before the accident.
She thought about what Melanie had said before she had rushed off. “You’re right, there was a horrible accident here years ago. A little girl was kidnapped and disappeared forever.”… She kept thinking about that. She just couldn’t get that thought out of her head. “Meet us here at 2:00 PM tomorrow, ok?” “I have to go to that spot tomorrow. I just have to.” she said out loud. I’m just gonna have to sneak away. I’ll do anything to be at that park tomorrow. As time passed, she drifted off to sleep, dreaming about her forgotten past.

Chapter 3

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“Let me go!” “ Shut up!” “Help!” “Now you’re gonna get it!” “No! Please! Help! Help! Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!”
Tires screech. I hear a gunshot. A great shock of pain hits me. I’m paralyzed with it. I can’t move. I feel blood cover my face. Then everything turns black.
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Arianna woke up screaming. Her body was drenched in sweat and covered with dry blood. She uncurled herself from her ball. Why did those two voices sound so familiar? I’ve had that dream before and until now; I’ve never recognized those voices…why did I recognize those voices now…why?
“ARIANNA! GET UP! NOW!” Arianna was interrupted from her thoughts by a scream. Suddenly, she felt someone yank her hair. “GET UP YOU LAZY BITCH!” Arianna was yanked to her feet. “Go get ready for work!” Arianna ran out of the room. She grabbed an old dress and rushed into the bathroom, not wanting to imagine what her stepfather would do next if she didn’t hurry.
When she got out, she had an old, raggedy dress. It reached her knees and was a faded green color. In its days, it had been a beautiful dress. It had had two straps. The dress had been beautiful with its elegant designs and bright colors. Now it was old and dirty. Its colors were dull and faded. One of its straps was broken, so the dress was only held up by one strap. Under it, Arianna wore a white shirt. As for her hair, she had it tied up in an old, faded bandanna.
The reason she wore bandannas was because of an accident that had happened years ago. When she had been seven, she had been cooking something for her stepfather, but it had gone horribly wrong. As she had been cooking, her hair had gotten too close to the fire and had caught on fire. She had put it out in the sink. By the time the fire was out, her hair had been burned already. She had been forced to cut it. Now, it was shoulder-length and in layers.
When she reached the kitchen, she started cooking her stepfather’s breakfast. As it was cooking, she opened the cupboard and looked around. After making sure no one was in sight, she took out a small bottle with sleeping pills. She poured a cup of orange juice after the food was ready and put two pills inside. They dissolved quickly and were gone in seconds. She put it on a platter and brought it to her stepfather who was in the dining room. She pretended to walk away but hid in her secret place; the fireplace.
The fireplace was very fancy. But it was also a secret passage. When you leaned on the wall in the back, it would open. It was like a flap. She went through it and stayed there for a while, waiting for the snores. As she had guessed, she heard her stepfather snoring few moments later. If the instructions were correct, then he would be asleep for the whole day. Perfect. Now I can go to the park and meet Melanie and Denzel! She went down the tunnel and after a few minutes reached the trapdoor. She opened it and quickly climbed up the steps and was outside a few seconds later. She closed the trapdoor and started walking. Now, she could go to the park!
Arianna found the dirt path quickly and was soon on her way. This is going to be a long walk. I should’ve gotten food. Oh well, it’s too late to turn back now. Slowly, she followed the path, enjoying her freedom. I wonder why they wanted me to mee them...mabye they’re gonna tell me about the accident. Arianna spent the rest of the walk wondering what happened in the park five years ago.
~*~
“Hi Denzel! “ “Hi! Has Arianna come yet?” “No. Not yet. It’s still 1:30, we said at 2:00.” “Yeah, you’re right.” “Listen, what are we going to tell her?” “What else? The truth.” “Even the part about us?” “Everything. She wants to know what happened, so we’ll tell her.” “Ok.” “ I wonder why she wore those clothes. I mean, she didn’t even have shoes on, but she still had money to buy groceries. Doesn’t that sound weired?” “I know, but its none of our business, so we can’t really ask her. I mean we barely know the girl.” “Yeah, you’re right.”
“Denzel! Melanie! Hi!” “Hi!” said Melanie.”Hi!” said Denzel. “We thought you weren’t gonna come.” “Sorry, I came late.” “It’s ok.” “Well, now that we’re all here, let’s eat!” “Lets sit here.” “Ok!” “I’ll set up the food.” Melanie started unpacking a basket she had brought. Arianna stared at it. Suddenly she remembered something.

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“C’mon! Lets set up the picnic here!” “Ok!”
~*~
“Why don’t we make a promise!?” “What type of promise?” "A...a...friendship promise!” “Ok
~*~
“We,...,..., and... promise to always stick by each other’s side. To always protect each other from danger. To always help each other in our times of need. To always be there for one another. And most importantly, to be friends forever...”
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Arianna froze. She had never remembered this before. She tried to remember the faces of the children that had been talking. How many children were there? But the more she tried to remember the details, the more she forgot them. Suddenly, she felt dizzy and faint. Denzel noticed quickly and said “Are you ok? You look pale.” “I’m fine...” whispered Arianna. Suddenly the world spun around her. She felt herself falling and everything went black.

me so sry bout symbols...its just so much wk to get thm off! i gav up...i thnk the 1st coupld of paragraphs r ok...but i cant keep taking off the symbols and on top of that adding alot...so...please...try reading it as best as u can w/out symbols...

and cool! u hav a quizilla account 2? uuuuu! wats ur username? cause me hav no ppl at all that i kno...and that way...instead of me emailing the stry 2 u...u can read it and manyu others on quizilla! (and i can get my 1st frnd... )...
well...i havnt started posting the strys yet, but i will...

and also, does any1 here like harry potter?

merged: 11-16-2006 ~ 10:09am
wow...
thats longest post me evr seen...mabye ill only post 1 chap at a time frm now on...

i rite too much...

Uzuma-san- Haha, it does make sense,actually. I guess.....You don't really feel like taking pictures or you never really think about taking pictures, but when you finaly do, you enjoy it! Or something like that... I think.

Oooh, I love those innocent, mushy scenes too! Whenever I watch them, my heart rate speeds up and I go into my serious, emotionally-deep tamaki mode! Plus I really enjoy them. I'm always called a fruitcake for liking them, but I really just don't give a damn what they say anymore, because in the end, I have the time of my life watching those scenes!

Well, I have to admit that every once in a while I get an urge to inflict fsome pain on someone....though it's not very often. Probably about....once every two weeks, but man it feels good! In those instances, I'm never scared of anything and I feel like I can take on anyone! Of course, I never tell anyone this as to avoid making people think that I'm crazy.....well, now it's out!

Nissa-san- Oooh, Quizilla! I love that site! I always take their quizes and sometimes their stories! I have an account, but I haven't gone there lately....Now I wanna go back!

Whoah, you wrote this!? Off of the top of your head!? Whoah, it's great! I can't wait for chapter 2! It has it's own artistic value that I have yet to find in other books! (It's also the fist book that I've actually wanted to read from chapter 1. The first 3 chapters of a book are usally boring). I will admit, I didn't expect the main characters to be just 11-12 years old....It kind of makes it more exciting! But, there was just one problem- there were a lot of question mark and I-don't-know-what marks, whick made it kind of hard to comprehend. I don't mean to be a bother, but.....could you email me the whole story? My email is- bdfordjr@yahoo.com. You don't have to go through the trouble of emailing me, but....I'd apriciate it!

ai-chan
you had a question? um... the one rite below mai post? i thot you wer talking to mira-neechan ^^''' [kuz it sed mira-chan] aiya sorryyyyyyyyyy! yayay kisses! *kisses an huggs* wheeeeeee!

ratkiller
welkom welkom! enjoy yrself here ^^ wats the signifikance of yr name by the way? ^^ jus kurious =p

makoto-chiB-kun
whaaa! aiyaaaaaa! sorryyyyyyyyy ;_;! i didnt wish you happy birthdayyyyyyyy! ;_;! oh i lov kameras! [i dont usually take piktures... but i lov taking piktures.... does that make sense? ^^''] i like video kameras too =p

haha yr so cute chiB-kun ^^ i aktually like mushy scenes too... an thos ones wher two people are so innocent that you jus want them to kiss already ! thos are the best ! haha =p

i lov... karate... judo... kendo... all thos nice self defense [an pain inflikting] stuffies ^^ i really dont mind getting hurt.. in fakt.. somtimes i want to... but... yeah... kinda weird... i jus lov traditional things ;_;

kishi-chan
im jus kurious... is part of yr story... not using regular characters? thers alot of question marks all ovr yr text so having a hard time reading it... jus checking ^^

lov you guys!
m.i.a. ^^

T-T me so sry me been gone! i can believe i forgot to go on...its just that ive been caught up w/ quizilla...i LUV THE FANFICTIONS THERE! i evn started riting 1 of my own! well...me gonna show u...Lost Memories. this is the stry i hav rites block...its 125 pgs...so...ill show it chap by chap...also...i just post it here...rght? well...i dont care...here's prologue-

Lost Memories
You can't escape the past...

Prologue
“Melanie! Denzel! Help!” “Let her go you son of a bitch!” “Get away or I’ll kill her!” The man took out a handkerchief and gagged Michelle. “Michelle! Please! What do you want with her!? She didn’t do anything to you! Just leave her alone!” “She didn’t but her parents did! Now get away!” The man took out a gun and pointed it at Michelle’s head. He walked away. Denzel tried running after him, but the man pointed the gun at him, pulled the trigger, and shot him all in one second. “Denzel!” Ambulances sounded in the distance. Melanie ran toward Denzel, crying and screaming at the same time. “Denzel! Are you ok!? He shot you!” The ambulances and the police arrived. Melanie was yanked from Denzel’s unconscious body. “Let me go! Denzel! Denzel!” “Come with me.” a police officer said, leading Melanie away from Denzel. “No! Let me go! Denzel! Denzel!” The police dragged Melanie away from the ambulance and into a police car. She cried, as she watched the ambulance disappear. As she watched Denzel disappear. And as she was being driven away, hatred filled her heart. Hatred for the man that had kidnapped Michelle and shot Denzel. Hatred for the police officer that had wretched her away from Denzel. Hatred for everything and everyone. The farther away she was driven from Denzel, the more hatred filled her heart.

Chapter 1

5 years later

“Hello?” “Hi Melanie!” Hi Denzel! How was your vacation!?” “Great! I had a lot of fun!” “You’re lucky. At least you got to go on a vacation.” “Yeah…listen, why don’t we meet each other at the park in half-an-hour?” “Ok. See you later! Bye!” “Bye!” Melanie hung up. She sighed happily, as she thought about Denzel. I have to pick out an outfit, she thought. It had been five years since the accident. Melanie and Denzel were now the best of friends. They had become very close after the accident. They talked about everything. Except Michelle.
Michelle was barely spoken of. After Denzel had come out of the hospital, Michelle hadn’t been mentioned a lot. Melanie and Denzel tried avoiding it as much as possible. It was just too painful. Of course both of them thought about her everyday, they just didn’t talk about her a lot. No one did. Her parents, her siblings, everyone. There had been a search after the accident, but Michelle was never found. Eventually, the police gave up the search, and had taken her for dead.
When Melanie reached the park, she spotted Denzel immediately. “Hi Melanie!” “Hi Denzel! I missed you. It was boring here without you around. I thought I was gonna die of boredom!” “Actually, that wouldn’t have been a tragedy. It would’ve been good.” Denzel was smiling. “Denzel!” Melanie pouted and tried to suppress a laugh. “Well, what can I say? It’s true!” “Oh, now you’re gonna get it!” Melanie started laughing and chasing Denzel. They ran through the park.
They stopped at a tree. They sat down at the roots, laughing. “I missed you too.” Melanie smiled. “I know.” They stayed there, enjoying the peace and quiet. “Denzel?” “Yeah?” “I miss her a lot.” Tears started sliding down Melanie’s face. There was a moment of silence before Denzel answered. “Me too…I miss her too.” He wiped her tears away and gently embraced her. They stayed like that for a while. Melanie broke the silence.
She whispered, “Ever since that day, she’s been haunting me. I can’t stop thinking about her. I know she’s not dead. She can’t be dead…I know it’s been five years, but I can still remember that day as if it was yesterday. I can still remember her screaming and crying. I can still remember how you ran after her. I can still remember how the police officer yanked me away from you and how I screamed and cried and struggled. I can still remember the hatred that sprouted in my heart. Denzel, I miss her so much!” Melanie started crying.
“Calm down Melanie. I know how you feel. I feel the same way. I miss her a lot too. Why wouldn’t we? She was our best friend. I still feel like…” “Like it was your fault?” “Yeah.” “You know it’s not your fault, right?” Denzel stayed quiet. “It wasn’t your fault! You couldn’t stop the man! You were only six! You have to understand that!” Denzel stayed silent. He knew a secret that he’d never be able to share. With anyone. Never. He knew it was his fault. It’d always be his fault and no one would ever change that. Ever.
Melanie got up and started walking. Denzel followed her. They walked in silence. They stopped when they reached the spot of the accident. They had been here before in the past five years. But this time it was different. Every year, on the day of the accident they came here. It was a routine. They stood there, staring in the direction Michelle had been taken. They stood there as memories of the past came back to haunt them. They stood there, reliving the day that had changed their lives forever…

well...thats all im gonna put...i was gonna put chap 2...but i thnk this is enough...please tell me wat u thnk! i luv to hear frm ppl!

well...seee u soon! (wenevr i can get bac on agen...)
ill be loking forward to ur replies!

Uzuma-san- Yaaaaaaay, I finaly have an internet connection again! So now I can hang out here more often! Anyway, my birthday was on October 9th. I asked my mom for dsl for my birthday and he said that she would get it, but nooooooo, she came up with some lame excuse and I end up with a cheap $20 camera! And I don't even take pictures! I hate pictures! Well, I guess it's the thought that counts....

Yep, karate! It's almost like the whole world is scared of me now.....It's kind of cool! I will admit that I do have some anger issues, but....I aslo have an amazing ammount of self control, so I never let it out...but, anyway, if I was in guam (or japan, wherever you are right now), I would be happy to protect you! Though I'm not really that good yet.....and I still have strings for arms.....well, I'll be able to in the future!

Ooooh, he still loves you! Yay! I like mushy scenes, especially when they're real! It sounds like it will work out in the end if he still loves you....I'm confused about a lot of things, but I just do it anyway, because let's face it- If we never did anything that we had doubts about, we wouldn't do anything! We always have doubts about everything, no matter what, so if we give in to all of our doubts, nothing would get done! But....there is a diference between doubt and common sense....well, I have high hopes that he'll go out with you again!

Sure you can join! I will add you right now! Welcome to the group Ratkiller! I hope that you find lots of friends here!

Hi there, can I join? There's a reason: I wish to make as many friends around the world as possible =)

I am well thanks sweety! You didnt response my question in the other day! Kisses!

ai-chan
whaaa! its bin so longgg! hao are you? !
m.i.a. ^^

Hello people! I hope that it is everthing allright with you!
Mira - chan is just to say that there is no problem by the site i give you. It makes the same, what this group made...make friends ^^..
And not so that there is more things ..like share photos , drawings (manga or anime if you have ) a lots of things..., so no be afraid ^^.
About your computer...dont you have a virus in your system? You allways have complications wiht him.
Well ...kisses.^^( i hope be here more times).See y a...

lionhearted-san!
haos it? its so good to see you here too! i lov playing here! so im sure youll lov it here too! wheeeeeee! mor people to play with! !

kishi-chan
we would lov to read it an giv you feed back ^^ [if you gav it to us evn if we didnt say anything i think we wouldv read it anyways =p]

makoto-chiB-kun
hao are youuuuuuuuuuuuuu! yeah chiB-kun.... one of mai groups has bin dead for almost two months nao... so sadd... thinking about leaving it... [but i really lov kimonos ;_;] oh shoot chiB_kun! wen wz yr birthday? x_X i remember riting it down.... but... i dont no wher i put it ^^'' you take karate? wowww! you kan protekt me nao ! wheeeeeeeeeeeee! hahaha! mm... i lov hurting people [that i dont like] an... i kan be rather violent... but im not a killer or anything x_X i try to stay kalm at all times so im really working on mai anger issues ;_; awww kom back soon k? we'll miss youuuuuuu!

aww chiB-kun... i told him that i still loved him... an he sed he loved me too... but he sed that hes still konfused... he lovs me.. but he doesnt no wat to do... so i told him ill wait for him... so wer still on buddy buddy terms at the moment ^^ but hes still mai most best frien ^^ so happy i lov him! =D

lov you guys!
m.i.a. ^^

Lionhearted911, in order for you to join, you are going to have to click on the 'Join group' link on the side of the page. We can not just add someones username into the member list. If groups could do that, they could just add everyone in MT to their group without them even realizing it. Clicking on the 'Join group' link is the default way for MT members to join any of minitokyo's groups. Let us know as soon as you do so that we can add you!

Nissa-san- Sorry! I still don't have an internet connection, so I couldn't answer you! Anyway, I'D LOVE TO READ ONE OF YOUR STORIES! Yay, a new story to read! Even if it is only 1, I'm sure I'd love it!

P.S.- after this post, I'll be gone for another week. Sorry!

Lion-san- YAY, a new member! Of course you can join!(If it were up to me. I'm just a member, not a mod. Sorry!) I'm kinda in disguse as well (In a way). I'm really a boring, emotionless, logical person in real life but on MT, I can talk the way I want and say what's really on my mind!

Uzuma-san- *sniff*....P-Please don't go.....I'll miss you.................

yes! of course! (its not rlly my decison...so wat can i say?)

if u do join...YAH! me no the new 1 anymore...well...ur newer to this club than me...hehe...

u guys didnt answr me! T-T
wud u like to read my stories? i rlly want feedbac!

eh...hello...can i join? i am really sweet and cute really..hahaha...
in disguise...honest...lools
so...umm can i?

aiya
i am not here at the moment...
an i forgot to tell evryone about it x_X
but to find out about mai wher-abouts....
please go visit mai page ^^
its ther [with a translation of japanese =p]
ill miss you guys!
m.i.a. ^^

yah! me so happy! i got my password bac! now i can go on wen evr i want! yah!

oh...also, i wanted to ask u guys if ud like to read a few of my stories (i only hav...4...but 1s forevr gone...so 3..and i have writers block on another...so 2...and i might not add more to another 1 for a long time...so 1!)

wud u like to read them anyway? i luv hearing feedbac on my stories!

Ooooh, so many people either came back or joined while I was gone! I'm sorry for being gone so long! My mom didn't pay the internet bill and I was and still am stuck without any internet acess!(I'm using a laptop at my dad's job right now).

Treefairy/Nissa-san- Yay, another member! Welcome to make-a-friend! Oooh, writing stories! I love writing stories! wow, 125 pages!? Dude, I could never type that much! The longest story I've ever typed of written was 78 pages! I enjoy writing stories and people say that they love my stories, but I haven't written any for the past year now....You've just inspiered me to write again! Whoops, how rude of me! I was supposed to introduce myself! My real name's Brian (nickname chiB-kun. Feel free to call me that. I like that name better anyways). I'm 14 (just turned 14 3 weeks ago), love anime, love writing books, and love animals! Especially my cat, whitey!(she's completely white, hence the name). And an embarassing fact- I can't sleep without my mickey mouse blanket! (it's because of the material, not mickey mouse) It's so warm and soft and fuzzy.... I LOVE IT! Yes, I am proud to be part of a group that isn't dead yet! One of the groups I joined went dead for a whole month and still is dead! So boring! But, this group is loads of fun and doesn't go dead!

Uzuma-san- Hahaha, people always go silent when I look at them, too! They talk about me beyond my back all day, but when I look at them, they shut up and I can see a little flicker of fear in their eyes!(everyone knows that I take karate lessons so they're all scared to death of me) What I really don't get is that if they are so scared of me, why do they talk about me behind my back? And they make it so obvious! They should be lucky that I'm not violent!

Oooh, the Haru-kaoru connection....So cool! There isn't anyone who can tell when something's bothering me like that! Not even my own mom! The friend who always mskes you laugh....I love people like that! My friend Amir is like that, except he doesn't even know it! I've told him several times, but he just still doesn't get it.....well, he'll remember someday! I have faith in him! Well, sort of....

Argh, so many complications! All you want to do is go out with this guy and almost everything that CAN go wrong DOES go wrong! Wait a sec.....you're not allowed to be alone with a guy? Do your parents have no trust in you or something? Wow......what you desire is so simple yet everyone and everything is getting in your way! I hate it when that kind of thing happens! Now I'm really out of ideas.....Well.... I could always wish you good luck! Sooo......I take all of my remaining good luck and give it to you! (and this time it better work!)

O-kaaaay, I went on a typing spree again! Sorry about that!