Unless anyone else objects, you're more than welcome Toya999 to make a button
for the group. I
think its a great idea to have one. Once its made, we can affiliate with other
groups and get more members. ^^ Have fun!
Quote by yothsothgothOh, you're
right! Humm... we must remedy that! Is anyone interested in making
one?
can i volunteer to make one? ^^ unless if someone else already has ^^
DarkRose~san your story really is nice and creative! very interesting, ahhhh
don't forget to please post the rest too! i enjoy reading ppls' writings
actually, especially if they're interesting.
what's even more intriguing is that the idea itself is also extremely creative
and nice too!
Good Luck on the rest! and i'd also be glad to read the rest! Don't
let go of the keyboard! jk
Quote: Do you know what your
"muse" is? What inspired your writing? How/when do you do your
writing? Does it just flow sometimes and not at all other times? I usually had
certain times when my writing was the best and other times I was dried up.
Lol, this story was... something that I came up really ummm... when I was in 6th
grade. I only started "writing" last year, but it doesn't mean the
idea hasn't been there for a long time. I practically have the whole thing in my
head for a long time... >.>, just now I actually got interested in writing
it.
(Note, I stopped at like half a page last year, hehe)
No, not a weirdo. :-P It just blew me away for a moment. I used to write some
stuff like that in high school. Sometimes I wrote about "past lives"
and I never knew where the stories came from. It just flowed. Usually I wrote at
night, right before I fell asleep. That was when words and stories just filled
my head. Kinda cool, but freaky too at the same time. I'd finally stop writing
and it'd be 3 or 4 pages and I'd be, "woah! what the heck?!" and then
throw my notebook aside and fall asleep. The next night I'd write more.
Do you know what your "muse" is? What inspired your writing? How/when
do you do your writing? Does it just flow sometimes and not at all other times?
I usually had certain times when my writing was the best and other times I was
dried up.
Edit: Yeah, character development (personally speaking) is a more gradual thing,
not something that just runs across and slaps you in the face.
Edit again:
Quote: I'm more mouth wide open and
wondering where all of that came from.
What kinda freaked some people out too was the idea. Well, not exactly freaked
out, but sort of like your reaction. D I
really just thought of it... I'm a weirdo... -.-
*jaw drops* No laughing at all. I'm more mouth wide open and wondering where all
of that came from. That sounds like a great storyline. I absolutely LOVE stories
like that! You have alot of storyline developing right away, not too much
character development right away... but there's nothing wrong with that. It can
always be developed later. I actually like fast plot. Sometimes when the plot
drags on forever, you get disinterestted in it before you even figure out how
good the actual story is. You've already got me hooked and are doing a wonderful
job. ^^ BTW: If you decide to post more of your story or email it to me when you
finish, I'd love you forever.
Umm, sure give me one sec. I'm just going to past a part of it.
Quote: "So, what do you
think?"
"It seems fine, but there seems to be some problems within this
region," the teacher said as she slowly points out all the problem
areas.
"Aw, but I worked so hard to make this."
I've always been like this, I always do my best, but the teacher always finds a
problem. I don't know if the teacher is out to get me, but I certainly know he
hates me. I've always thought of myself as a normal student with just average
grades and friends. I wish it always was like that, but nothing can stay the
same, sadly...
I've been called a few things, some even called me a princess, but I have no
idea why. My friends once described me as weird, but I don't know if she was
just teasing me or was bored. Anyways, my name, well its kind of weird, my name
is Luore, but I don't even know which language it comes from, my mom says its
translation is Rose, so thatâ??s what everyone, but my parents,
call me. I'm currently fifteen with long flowing black hair and oddly enough, I
have purple eyes.
My parents were always odd and sort of always hiding something from me. They
would always talk about something behind doors, and I would hear my name once in
a while whenever I passed by and it usually is like an argument, but it seems to
pertain to me. This has been happening to me for the past three years on and off
and I just started to ignore it. Sometimes my dad or my mom would ask me to
listen to something, but seconds later they will change their minds. During my
childhood though, nothing like this has ever happened, and yet the frequency of
it is increasing until then.
It just happened a week ago and there was no explanation for the incident.
About two blocks away from my house, a robbery had occurred while I was coming
back from school. When I crossed the street, the getaway car of the thieves was
heading towards me. I was rendered helpless and immobile out of fear. It just
came at me and I just covered my eyes just waiting for the impact. Just after
fifteen seconds later, I peeped out to find the car split in half with the
driver just staring at me scared like a man that was about to be shot. Soon, the
police came by and arrested the man while I stood their confused, scared, and
shaken to the bones.
"What happened and do you know anything that just happened?" an
officer inquired me.
"I don't know, I... I... have absolutely... no idea,â?? I
responded frantically.
Hoping to avoid any further questioning, I just quickly ran off. To my
surprise, no one was following me back home as I was expecting someone to follow
me and constantly pester me with questions. When I entered through the door of
my home, everything seemed normal, at least I wished it were, until I got into
the living room and saw my parents watching the news. I saw myself about to get
ran over when suddenly an ethereal like sphere came right out of me and
literally split the car into two. It was stated by the reporter that nothing
seems to happen and just suddenly the car split into two. I then realize that no
one had seen that orb that encompassed me.
Before I knew it, my parents were right behind me. I didn't see them move, and
a second a go, they were just on the couch. I was beyond confused, and scared.
When I turned around, I saw my dad with a feathery angel like wings and my mom
with a sort of bony wings with a thin membrane connecting them, sort of like bat
wings.
"We need to talk" my dad spoke quietly, yet quickly.
He then put two fingers on my forehead and in an odd tone, yet inhumanly deep
voice, spoke out this one word, "rejuke" which I have absolutely no
idea what it was. Just then, I felt as if something was on my back and I started
to see ghostly, and yet not so frightening figures flying around me. Then slowly
out of curiosity, I turned my head to see what was behind me. I was so shocked
that I felt that I couldnâ??t move, nor even stand. It was a pair
of black feathery wings. My mom quietly told me to sit down on the couch, and
from their facial expression, it seems like it was going to be a long day. So in
that one-day, they said they were only able to inform me of little of
whatâ??s going on. So my dad started to explain bits and bits as he
saidâ?¦
â??Everything in this universe is connected by three separated
regions. Lyeute (Heaven), Kyake (Hell), Foakez (Void). Contrary to what many
people think, people donâ??t simply gain entrance to any or either
by what deeds they perform, but how well they connect to their spirit. The
spirit is sort of a guide, and also what supports and contributes a part of
their strength and abilities along with your own. If there is barely if any sort
of relationship with the spirit and being, the personâ??s
remainder, the creation of a spirit, will be sent to the void or left behind by
the spiritâ??s choice. If the relation were made well, upon death,
the created spirit would be sent to the inhabited spiritâ??s realm.
An example, if a demon spirit, were to inhabit a person, and they grew up with a
good relation, the personâ??s spirit would be sent to Kyake, or
Hell. As for what the spirit can help you do, if you were to become well
connected with your spirit, and if you and the spirit are quite well in sync,
you would be able to channel spells through the spirit while, but if both of you
are strong enough, you could summon your spirit into the living. Also, on a
small note, a demon and angel are just races, nothing more or less and your
spirits are usually the same gender as you are.â?? By the time he
was finished though, I couldnâ??t see their wings anymore, and so I
assume the spell or whatever wore off.
Thats just like... 1 - 2 pages of it.
NO LAUGHY T.T
Thats just pretty much 1% of the whole story, :P
I'm writing a story, around the genre of fantasy and probably some romance....
>.>. MS Word, 12 font, no spacing (unless you want to count paragraph
indents and stuff, but yeah) and umm, 6 pages in the first day... >.>, now
I have a headache, :P. One of my friend read part of it, said it was pretty
good. My friend went, "wtf?!" I thought this was going to be short.
>.>
Quote: I have noticed that a few
people are on MT all the time. I wonder if these people live at home and don't
have a job or if they just are on vacation all the time or something?
Or they left there explorer on MT and didn't log out?
Quote: Oh, I do know about the
perfection thing. You have to pretty much say you're perfect for the job
anywhere anymore. They always ask you, "what makes you so good at what you
do?" I always go... "boy, I feel like I'm having to sell myself."
I
hate it. Interviews make me feel like crap. You pour all of your life and
experiences into one little point in time, have to "prove" yourself
and your "worth" to people you don't even know. To me, its kinda
disgusting. *has no job love right now*
I AM PERFECT FOR THIS JOB *cough* no I'm not *cough*
Mmmm... yeah, I have some personal issues going on at the moment, so I don't
know if I'll be replying that much... (and its because I'm an idiot -.-)
well I'm going to rejoin now ^_^ maybe things have settled enough...I didn't
want to rejoin just yet, short of time and then there was maybe a thought there
could be a repeat so hiya again ^_^
Quote by DarkRoseofHell
Plus, I'd rather love someone that's imperfect rather than perfect (also people
that are said to be "perfect" usually tends to have a huge
ego)
Quote by kokuyu
generally speaking, many would like to have perfection, just like how one dreams
of A World Without Criminals
but a point to ponder here is, when 'good' is born, 'bad' arises too; so does
other things, there's always the opposite side tagging along
thus, for me, i'll opted for imperfection, which also implies i do accept the
flaws/bad side behind.
*agrees* no such thing as perfection anyways, just present in the dictionary
under the section for "P".
Quote by kokuyu
but not in business companies.......boss don't like that word 'imperfect'.....so
don't tell him "i'm not perfect, boss..." and there goes the Donald
Trump's "YOU'RE FIRED!" (my dad always act like in a company at home, so i've to learn to be a bit
more 'perfect' )
hmmm.............did i got out of point already?
haha yea even my dad expects perfection or else
i'd always be regarded as "stubborn" and "rude"
and yup u made a point.
Quote by yothsothgothI have noticed
that a few people are on MT all the time.
I wonder if these people live at home and don't have a job or if they just are
on vacation all the time or something?
probably just have more time, or they MT while studying?
Quote by yothsothgoth
Oh, I do know about the perfection thing. You have to pretty much say you're
perfect for the job anywhere anymore.
lol so we actually have to lie by telling the interviewer that we're perfect for
the job.
---
yay~! Uzu~chan, long time no talk.
other than that, ummm...the group has no avatar, is there a reason?
hihi i like visiting here
merged: 01-30-2008 ~ 08:43pm
ummm do i quote a lot?
i just noticed i was the only one who quotes loads
I think there are highs and lows here at MT on the number of people who post or
just check things here. I can understand when people say they have other things
they have to do: random things come up, school, forgot to login, projects around
the house, etc... There's always something that comes up. I say no worries. ^^
Come by when you can, say hello and check on your friends, and then go get your
stuff done. I have noticed that a few people are on MT all the time. I wonder if these people live at home and don't have
a job or if they just are on vacation all the time or something?
Oh, I do know about the perfection thing. You have to pretty much say you're
perfect for the job anywhere anymore. They always ask you, "what makes you
so good at what you do?" I always go... "boy, I feel like I'm having
to sell myself." I hate
it. Interviews make me feel like crap. You pour all of your life and experiences
into one little point in time, have to "prove" yourself and your
"worth" to people you don't even know. To me, its kinda disgusting.
*has no job love right now*
Lol, nah its fine. Even though it was sort of odd to read that, I understand,
and hey, no problem. I can be on, but sometimes (or usually) I don't have enough
time to respond to anything.
hai hai everyone!
sorry iv bin away for so long / . . \
i no ill bave more time to kom here wen i go to kollege...
so please be patient with me.....
i promise ill be back =)
m.i.a.
generally speaking, many would like to have perfection, just like how one dreams
of A World Without Criminals
but a point to ponder here is, when 'good' is born, 'bad' arises too; so does
other things, there's always the opposite side tagging along
thus, for me, i'll opted for imperfection, which also implies i do accept the
flaws/bad side behind.
come to think about it, it actually is good for the peace of one's mind, rather
than spending time expecting/worrying something perfect/good to happen.
perfect is a rare thing >.> majority are imperfect, and that's a fact
already
but not in business companies.......boss don't like that word 'imperfect'.....so
don't tell him "i'm not perfect, boss..." and there goes the Donald
Trump's "YOU'RE FIRED!" (my dad always act like in a company at home, so i've to learn to be a bit
more 'perfect' )
any reason? -if you whoever's answering doesn't mind giving me one - (i actually agree with you DarkRose~san, but i like knowing peoples'
opinions on different issues and matters)
No, I'm just overall horrible.
and... HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII *hugs doomeddreamer*
D
merged: 02-09-2008 ~ 09:05am
Oh yeah, I'm bi too, and I'm Trangender, >.>
Welcome doomeddreamer to the group! ^^ Its nice to see this group grow.
I'm okay with some art, but its always up to the person looking at it to say if its "good" or not.
Go for it! And my story will be a weird thing people can read for no reason, lol.
merged: 02-08-2008 ~ 07:47am
Never ever ask me to do something to do with art, :P
Unless anyone else objects, you're more than welcome Toya999 to make a button for the group.
I
think its a great idea to have one. Once its made, we can affiliate with other
groups and get more members. ^^ Have fun!
*lets go of keyboard*
XD
Anyways... thanks.
can i volunteer to make one? ^^ unless if someone else already has ^^
DarkRose~san your story really is nice and creative! very interesting, ahhhh don't forget to please post the rest too! i enjoy reading ppls' writings actually, especially if they're interesting.
Don't
let go of the keyboard! 
jk 
what's even more intriguing is that the idea itself is also extremely creative and nice too!
Good Luck on the rest! and i'd also be glad to read the rest!
Lol, this story was... something that I came up really ummm... when I was in 6th grade. I only started "writing" last year, but it doesn't mean the idea hasn't been there for a long time. I practically have the whole thing in my head for a long time... >.>, just now I actually got interested in writing it.
(Note, I stopped at like half a page last year, hehe)
No, not a weirdo. :-P It just blew me away for a moment. I used to write some stuff like that in high school. Sometimes I wrote about "past lives" and I never knew where the stories came from. It just flowed. Usually I wrote at night, right before I fell asleep. That was when words and stories just filled my head. Kinda cool, but freaky too at the same time. I'd finally stop writing and it'd be 3 or 4 pages and I'd be, "woah! what the heck?!" and then throw my notebook aside and fall asleep. The next night I'd write more.
Do you know what your "muse" is? What inspired your writing? How/when do you do your writing? Does it just flow sometimes and not at all other times? I usually had certain times when my writing was the best and other times I was dried up.
Awwww thanks.
Edit: Yeah, character development (personally speaking) is a more gradual thing, not something that just runs across and slaps you in the face.
Edit again:
What kinda freaked some people out too was the idea. Well, not exactly freaked out, but sort of like your reaction.
*jaw drops* No laughing at all. I'm more mouth wide open and wondering where all of that came from. That sounds like a great storyline. I absolutely LOVE stories like that!
You have alot of storyline developing right away, not too much
character development right away... but there's nothing wrong with that. It can
always be developed later. I actually like fast plot. Sometimes when the plot
drags on forever, you get disinterestted in it before you even figure out how
good the actual story is. You've already got me hooked and are doing a wonderful
job. ^^ BTW: If you decide to post more of your story or email it to me when you
finish, I'd love you forever. 
Umm, sure give me one sec. I'm just going to past a part of it.
Thats just like... 1 - 2 pages of it.
NO LAUGHY T.T
Thats just pretty much 1% of the whole story, :P
Do you plan to post your story? ...cuz if you do, I'd love to read it. ^^
I'm writing a story, around the genre of fantasy and probably some romance.... >.>. MS Word, 12 font, no spacing (unless you want to count paragraph indents and stuff, but yeah) and umm, 6 pages in the first day... >.>, now I have a headache, :P. One of my friend read part of it, said it was pretty good.
My friend went, "wtf?!" I thought this was going to be short.
>.>
I'm online a lot but not mt but I work at home so I guess that could account for my down time ^_^
Or they left there explorer on MT and didn't log out?
I AM PERFECT FOR THIS JOB *cough* no I'm not *cough*
Mmmm... yeah, I have some personal issues going on at the moment, so I don't know if I'll be replying that much... (and its because I'm an idiot -.-)
well I'm going to rejoin now ^_^ maybe things have settled enough...I didn't want to rejoin just yet, short of time and then there was maybe a thought there could be a repeat so hiya again ^_^
Oh, you're right!
Humm... we must remedy that! Is anyone interested in making one?
*agrees* no such thing as perfection anyways, just present in the dictionary under the section for "P".
haha yea even my dad expects perfection
or else
i'd always be regarded as "stubborn" and "rude" 
and yup u made a point.
probably just have more time, or they MT while studying?
lol so we actually have to lie by telling the interviewer that we're perfect for the job.
---
yay~! Uzu~chan, long time no talk.
other than that, ummm...the group has no avatar, is there a reason?
hihi i like visiting here
merged: 01-30-2008 ~ 08:43pm
ummm do i quote a lot?
I think there are highs and lows here at MT on the number of people who post or just check things here. I can understand when people say they have other things they have to do: random things come up, school, forgot to login, projects around the house, etc... There's always something that comes up. I say no worries. ^^ Come by when you can, say hello and check on your friends, and then go get your stuff done. I have noticed that a few people are on MT all the time. I wonder if these people live at home and don't have a job or if they just are on vacation all the time or something?
Oh, I do know about the perfection thing. You have to pretty much say you're perfect for the job anywhere anymore. They always ask you, "what makes you so good at what you do?" I always go... "boy, I feel like I'm having to sell myself."
I hate
it. Interviews make me feel like crap. You pour all of your life and experiences
into one little point in time, have to "prove" yourself and your
"worth" to people you don't even know. To me, its kinda disgusting.
*has no job love right now*
Lol, nah its fine. Even though it was sort of odd to read that, I understand, and hey, no problem. I can be on, but sometimes (or usually) I don't have enough time to respond to anything.
hai hai everyone!
sorry iv bin away for so long / . . \
i no ill bave more time to kom here wen i go to kollege...
so please be patient with me.....
i promise ill be back =)
m.i.a.
well.........
generally speaking, many would like to have perfection, just like how one dreams of A World Without Criminals
but a point to ponder here is, when 'good' is born, 'bad' arises too; so does other things, there's always the opposite side tagging along
thus, for me, i'll opted for imperfection, which also implies i do accept the flaws/bad side behind.
come to think about it, it actually is good for the peace of one's mind, rather than spending time expecting/worrying something perfect/good to happen.
perfect is a rare thing >.> majority are imperfect, and that's a fact already
but not in business companies.......boss don't like that word 'imperfect'.....so don't tell him "i'm not perfect, boss..." and there goes the Donald Trump's "YOU'RE FIRED!"
(my dad always act like in a company at home, so i've to learn to be a bit
more 'perfect' 
)
hmmm.............did i got out of point already?
Yeah. If they're perfect, not only is it creepy, but it seems rather dull and pointless. *cough* pleasantville *cough*
Plus, I'd rather love someone that's imperfect rather than perfect (also people that are said to be "perfect" usually tends to have a huge ego)
any reason? -if you whoever's answering doesn't mind giving me one
- (i actually agree with you DarkRose~san, but i like knowing peoples'
opinions on different issues and matters) 